The Day When People Disappear At Camp
It was a dark and scary night when Chris and Joe went outside and they saw someone was looking at them. They ran back inside and nobody was there. They got scared and locked the door and slept over night. They woke up to see if it was a dream but nobody was there. They went outside and someone was still there, they chased after it but the creature ran away.
Chris and Joe went into the girl's cabin to see if anyone was there their. They saw Mya and Hailee their. They joined the boys to see if there were any teachers. They found Mrs T Mrs T was as scared as a mouse being chased by a cat. They went outside to see if anyone was there but they weren't. It was getting cold and dark so they had dinner and went to sleep in the same cabin.
At the middle of the night they heard the door creak but they kept on sleeping. There was a big shadow and in a blink of an eye they screamed and gave them a fright. Turns out the people hiding were there class mates doing a prank.
Tomorrow we are going to camp raglan for 2 nights and 3 days. So we did a narrative and we had to have a problem and a solution.
Ha pure gold man! You did have a few mistakes though. The end was funny and I liked how you said why you did this narrative for. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteThanks for committing on my blog Mason! I will work on the mistakes to.
ReplyDeleteThanks for committing on my blog Mason! I will work on the mistakes to.
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